♦Ginger♦
Trainee
"I wield the power. Ready to die?"
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Post by ♦Ginger♦ on Jun 25, 2007 20:48:12 GMT -6
Gingerpaw walked up to the Leader's den and repeated in her head"Rowanpaw fell into the waterfall.."GIngerpaw meowed to Pheonixstar when she enter the den"Pheonixstar I have to tell you horrible news..Rowanpaw is dead he fell of the waterfalls and well broke his neck and drifted up the current i couldn't get him.."Gingerpaw looked at her paws and started to cry...
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Post by CUJOlove on Jun 26, 2007 8:45:17 GMT -6
//That is bad grammer, and power-playing. You cannot say Phoenixstar entered, and it would be "Gingerpaw has bad news..." Not "Gingerpaw got bad news...".//
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