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Post by CUJOlove on Jun 6, 2007 10:09:55 GMT -6
ArtemisStar padded into Crystalstorm's den, the braken and lichen brushing her pelt gently as she went through the entrance. Crystalstorm? Are you here? I've got a question to ask you, ArtemisStar mewed, her gaze flicking around the clearing.
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Post by BloodFang&FireFang on Jun 6, 2007 10:11:25 GMT -6
" yes what is it." she meowed coming out.
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Post by CUJOlove on Jun 6, 2007 10:17:47 GMT -6
Would you like to consider taking on an apprentice? ArtemisStar asked, walking up to Crystalstorm. She sat down next to Crystalstorm. A bird chirped in the distance, making ArtemisStar she was out hunting.
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Post by BloodFang&FireFang on Jun 6, 2007 10:20:04 GMT -6
" Sure and it would be helpfull to have an apprentice." she meowed.
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Post by CUJOlove on Jun 6, 2007 10:24:26 GMT -6
//You don't need to put a space between the first word of what your chars say and the quotation mark thing..."Sure..........." <---that's how you should write it.//
Is there any kits you think should become Mediciene Cats? ArtemisStar asked, cocking her head to the side. Her ear twiched as another bird chirpped.
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Post by BloodFang&FireFang on Jun 6, 2007 10:26:12 GMT -6
"what kits are in the nuresy now or any of the apprentices want to be a medicine cat apprentice." she meowed.
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Post by CUJOlove on Jun 6, 2007 10:30:15 GMT -6
//Do we have any apprentices? Or kits? lol//
Well, you can ask them if you want too. I'm sure they won't mind, ArtemisStar mewed, her ear twitching again. She curled her tail around her paws tightly.
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Post by BloodFang&FireFang on Jun 6, 2007 10:32:39 GMT -6
( i don't think so)
"well will see." she meowed she missed her father and brother becasuse they left here personailty had changed.
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Post by CUJOlove on Jun 6, 2007 10:36:00 GMT -6
//Lol...//
ArtemisStar leaned over and licked Crystalstorm between the ears. I know you miss your father and brother...it's alright. They may return in time. She meowed quietly, her gaze flicking across the mediciene cat's face.
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Post by BloodFang&FireFang on Jun 6, 2007 10:37:30 GMT -6
"i hope so i thought female leaders could not have kits though." she meowed.
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Post by CUJOlove on Jun 7, 2007 8:29:14 GMT -6
They can't...what makes you ask that? ArtemisStar mewed, her eyes clouded with confusion. She blinked and shook her head, then swiped her tongue over her paw and drew it over her left ear.
//The letter ''i'' needs to be capitallized if the character is talking about themself...so it would be 'I hope so...I thought female leaders could not have kits though,' //
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Post by BloodFang&FireFang on Jun 7, 2007 11:11:29 GMT -6
" but Pheonixstar has kits." she meowed.
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Post by CUJOlove on Jun 7, 2007 15:14:08 GMT -6
She had them before she became leader of FireClan, ArtemisStar mewed, thinking of her friend's kits. She remembered when Phoenixstar had born her first litter, she had been Phoenixtear then.
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Post by BloodFang&FireFang on Jun 7, 2007 15:22:30 GMT -6
"But she had a second liter." she meowed.
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Post by CUJOlove on Jun 7, 2007 15:24:33 GMT -6
When? ArtemisStar asked, wondering how Crystalstorm would know before she did.
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