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Post by CUJOlove on Jun 9, 2007 18:05:32 GMT -6
ArtemisStar padded into the FireClan camp carrying Silverkit in her jaws. She looked around, not sure where to go. She had never been in the heart of the FireClan camp, she had only seen it from a distance. Phoenixstar? She mewed through Silverkit's fluff.
Her den is over there, Silverkit mewed, pointing with his muzzle.
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Post by Fainauriel on Jun 9, 2007 18:10:53 GMT -6
Nightkit saw her brother and Yowled, "Silverkit Your back!"
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BloodFang&FireFang
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Post by BloodFang&FireFang on Jun 9, 2007 18:11:59 GMT -6
Hiddenshadow padded out out of the den and came over to Silverkit but backed away when he saw Artemistar for she had baned him from her clan.
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Post by CUJOlove on Jun 10, 2007 10:54:21 GMT -6
//No, ArtemisStar didn't. The real ArtemisStar would never ban anyone. She'd just be mad. Phoenix, 'your' would not be capitallized. You only capitallize the first word in the sentance unless it is a proper noun, and the word 'your' is common. Not proper.//
Bloodfang, hello. It's been a while since we've seen each other. Tell me, where is Phoenixstar? ArtemisStar mewed curtly, still holding Silverkit. She held back a purr of ammusement as Nightkit greeted Silverkit.
Silverkit hung by the scruff in ArtemisStar's jaws. Hey Nightkit! I got to meet ArtemisStar! She is so cool! You gotta explore the territory! It's fun! Come on! He mewed, forgetting he was held in place as he tried to run.
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Post by Fainauriel on Jun 10, 2007 11:58:19 GMT -6
Nightkit watched him. "What are you doing?" ///sorry about the ban thing.///
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Post by CUJOlove on Jun 10, 2007 12:05:49 GMT -6
Hangin' out, Silverkit mewed, calming down. He looked around, trying to spot Phoenixstar. He wondered how the two leaders would react when they saw each other.
//You going to post with Phoenixstar?//
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Post by BloodFang&FireFang on Jun 11, 2007 7:08:41 GMT -6
Bluejay padded up to his father Hiddenshadow. He let out a squeak as Askit bit into his tail. " not this again Ashkit." he meowed.
Timberwolf came out of his leader's den and when he saw Artimsstar went back into the den to tell her.
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Post by Fainauriel on Jun 15, 2007 14:32:38 GMT -6
Phoenixstar scented ArtemisStar and ran out of her den. "What do you want?" She asked.
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Post by CUJOlove on Jun 15, 2007 14:37:22 GMT -6
So I recieve hostility for trying to return a kit? ArtemisStar meowed around Silverkit's scruff. She raised her head and glared at Phoenixstar. You should really start paying more attention to your apprentices that deserve to be warriors, and take better care of the clan's kits, not taking warriors from my clan and mating with them, ArtemisStar meowed coldly, hinting about the fact that Flare was still an apprentice even though she was 13 moons.
//NO ONE-LINERS. ADD DESCRIPTION. ADD FEELING. ADD SOMETHING.//
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Post by Fainauriel on Jun 15, 2007 14:43:59 GMT -6
///FINE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!///
Phoenixstar andswered werily, "Sorry, I've been worried about my son. Sorry I snapped at you." She hoped her friend would understand. "I'm going to have Flare's warriors ceremony soon. I've just been worried that StarClan would not accept her cause her leader had kits with another clan warrior. You wouldn't understand," She mewed.
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Post by CUJOlove on Jun 15, 2007 15:02:24 GMT -6
//Don't say cause. Use the whole word. NO CHAT SPEAK!//
If you were really a good leader, you would know that three of your clanmates are being held captive for tresspassing in my clan, ArtemisStar meowed, glaring at Phoenixstar. She lashed her tail, still holding Silverkit, wondering if Phoenixstar would request that she put her son down.
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Post by Wistful//Zombie//BAMF;; on Jun 15, 2007 15:04:33 GMT -6
//Cause is acceptable, it's a word. But she used it wrong. She should have put Cause' see the apostrophe? That means you're shortening it for character and voice.//
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Post by Fainauriel on Jun 15, 2007 15:10:04 GMT -6
///love your avatar!///
"What! What have you done with them!" Phoeixstar mewed, then growled in one breath, "Put-my-kit-down. Then you lead my clan!" She said this after her kit was put down.
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Post by CUJOlove on Jun 15, 2007 15:22:00 GMT -6
//You can't make my character put Silverkit down. You have to wait until I say ArtemisStar puts silverkit down.//
ArtemisStar set Silverkit down gently, licking him between the ears.
You're mean! I don't like you anymore! Silverkit screeched at his mother, then dashed off towards the nursery. He barreled through the brambles surrounding it, then threw himself onto the nearest nest and cried.
I did nothing to the cats who tresspassed on EnergyClan territory. They are staying in our elder's den, since there are no other ocupants, ArtemisStar meowed, then turned and padded towards the entrance.
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Post by Fainauriel on Jun 15, 2007 21:59:29 GMT -6
"Will you let me see them?" Phoenixstar mewed, "But first let me take a look at my kit." She said as she padded toward the nursey. "Silverkit, I'm sorry. I was just really worried about you and I shouldn't have said the things I said. Worry does that to a parent. I really was worried about you," She mewed as she laid by her son.
Nightkit wandered over and sat by her mother. So did Yellowfield. "Phoenixstar, Lightningkit, Lynxkit, and Sunkit are ready to become apprentices," Yellowfield mewed.
"Okay, We will have the ceremony when we have Flare's Warrior ceremony," Phoenixstar replied.
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